Hi There! It's me, Hana.
And today, I've decided to post a blog about the poem that I wrote for my writing.
It's called, If I Had The Wisdom Of An Owl.
It was inspired by Wings, by Pie Corbett.
I took the poem, Wings's structure and used it in my poem.
In the end, I made a poem that went like this...
Please read, comment, and enjoy!
Hello Hana, it's me Parwin!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was awesome and was a very interesting one actually. The poem itself was amazing and the background is awesome as well? Did you make it yourself? Probably, am I right?
This reminded me of when I wrote a poem sort of similar but I I think I picked Valerie Bloom instead of Pie Corbet. I think that I might publish one of them but I'm not sure because if you haven't realized, I'm not very good at, um writing poems so I'll think about that!
I think that to improve, you could explain more about why you decided to pick that topic or maybe what type of poem that is because some people think that poems have to rhyme or this or that and some people might be confused so if you explain that then it would make it even better!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin