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Wednesday 4 September 2019

DA DIARY OF DARTH VADER * Darth Vader Breathing Sound Effects* Wow! :3

Kia ora!

Today, I've decided to post a blog about my writing.

We wrote as if Darth Vader was writing in his diary about his day off.

I made mine really funny.

And just saying, It isn't finished yet. So please don't go commenting saying that I haven't finished it yet, because I already know.

Anyway, there's not much to say, because the slide below says everything else.

Please read, comment, and enjoy!




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1 comment:

  1. Grant M8 September 2019 at 09:22

    Wow! That was a crazy and slightly disturbing diary entry from Darth Vader. Don't be afraid to use full stops and shorter sentences. Short sentences need love too. Good imaginative writing. :-)

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