Kia-ora, This week I have been practising using capital letters and full stops. I have made my very own book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please have a look and leave me a comment about my writing.
Thursday, 27 September 2018
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Hello Hana!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully illustrated story! You have thought really well about how to use shapes in your slides to make everything look pixelated! What a professional looking book! I loved the strong words that you used in your story and the descriptions made everything come alive - tino pai! Next time try and use even more punctuation, like speech marks on dialogue :)
From Miss W
Hello Hana!
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful post about being stuck in a game.
Good job on using your CAPITALS and Periods.
Periods is a Synonym for Full-Stops. Synonyms-words that mean the same.
Keep Up The Great Work!
Yours Kindly
Teegan Ducharme
Fantastic! Hey Hana
ReplyDeleteIts me Nikita And I just wanna tell you this is just a amazing! Blogpost it reminds me of when I get glued to my computer, Because I just love video games. Keep up being amazing and I wanna see more clever ideas coming from you. From ~ Nikita
Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way you used lots of different shapes to make everything pixelated and cool! You taught me that it is not that hard to make a cool pixelated story like that. Next time, you could focus on your punctuation. How did you make those star things?
ReplyDelete-Amelia
Hi Hana, it's Mikael, I think that that piece of writing is really good. I like how you have made a pitcher to go with the writing. Next time I think
ReplyDeleteyou should use ore comers. For example, when you have suddenly a bright flash of light blocked my view you should put a comer after the suddenly. But apart from that is is really good.
Very clever Hana. I like how you have used the slide to help make an adventure story. I must get you to show me how to do that.
ReplyDeleteHi Hana,
ReplyDeleteI like your story. Your pictures look great and it looks like you took long hours on it. My favourite part of the story is when everyone celebrates and you said 'it's the best thing on my list'. Because I thought 'wait, Hana had a list the whole time? For what?'.
This reminds me of making a fan story. Fan stories is basically someone putting themselves in a book someone else made. It's like rewriting a story about me in Humpty Dumpty. I wrote a fan story about me as little red riding hood.
You should probably check all your blogs because all of them has a punctuation mistake. I saw a poster saying 'i like cooking my family and my pets. Use commas, don't be crazy'. It was in the staff room. There are a lot of fun and motivating posters in there.
By Mika >.<