Ki-ora! my name is Hana and I am a student at Yaldhurst model school I am 8 years old. this is my first blog post EVER! so I would like to talk about me!
I live in Christchurch, I love to spend my time with nature, my family and playing my ukulele. I favor camping in Arthur's pass, me and my family like to go there because my Dad can go hunting for venison. My Mom, me and my sister like Arthur's pass because of the extraordinary view. My favorite sport is table ping pong and swimming. My dream is to be able to fly, one day I might start studying to try to invent something that I could pass on so it would improve and my dream could come true! My family used to have a dog named Oscar, though he passed away at the age of 15, he had a good life. We all grew up together as a family but we had to lose one. my favorite part of my house is my garden, we grow food, flowers and much more. Every day the garden improves thank-you to my hard-working Mother. My Mom is 43 and my dad is 52. I have a grandma and grandad, my grandad also passed away but my grandma is still going. We also have a cat that wonders around, we see him lots before we go to school he is a nice cat his name is Roxy. I have an AMAZING big sister she is caring, kind, sharing and lots more, she really does mean the world to me! My family lives in a container house because My Dad wanted to design the house how he liked it. There is a fireplace, a kids area, and an Xbox! (which will come back very very soon) and also My Dad works very hard every day and every night to find and cut firewood for the fire to keep us nice and cozy warm. Thank you for taking your time to read this, I hope you now know lots about me!
Hi Hana,
ReplyDeleteI like how much infomation you wrote in your post. Maybe tone down the personal facts like Oscar and Grandad dying. Also cheak your puntiouation, relearn the basics Hana. And make it pop a bit more with a few photoes and some colour. Besides that, it's a really good first blog. Can you please reply, I have start a blogatation which is a convertation but in a blog. Just do that about 50 times and it will be fine. Thanks.
From Mika :P
thank you Mika for commenting and yes, I should have left that part out.thank you for pointing that out (screaming with anger in the corner) and the teacher said for me to just keep it simple so I was not allowed to put pictures and colour. Oh, and about the blogataionthingy, I don't know where your going with that comment, but i'll just leave it. thank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteHi Mika and Hana,
DeleteIt's lovely to see that you are starting a conversation, or 'blogasation', about Hana's first post! Thank you for leaving Hana some tips to guide her blogging journey - onwards and upwards! Perhaps we can have a look at Mika's blog to get some ideas for great blog posts?
From Miss W
Hi Hana and Mrs Walters,
DeleteI just posted the crazy potoo. People had a mixed reaction to it. People would either laugh or ask if it's real and if it has a problem. And your welcome for guiding Hana to the end of the journy. I'm like the wind carrying the seed to the ground. Ok, it's getting a bit cheesy here. I'll end my comment so it won't get any weirder.
By Mika
and here we go with the blogasation, I wonder where it will go next. let me guess, we will start world war 3. now you just take it wherever you desire. now I will try to stay away from the blogatation.
DeleteHi Hana, Mika and Miss Walters,
DeleteI'm loving this bloggersation. It's great to see you do your first blog post Hana. I hope you enjoy blogging and start to blog more. Mika is a great person to learn how to write quality blog posts from. I look forward to your next blog post.
Mrs Taylor :)
Really well done Hana. A very imaginative story with some great images. Where ever do you get your ideas? Grandma will be pleased to see that she is "still going". :-)
ReplyDeleteThere's 5 people in this blogasation now? :0 I feel like this is going to be a never ending blogasation. Here's a link to my blog if you want any ideas from mine. Just don't go down too far, I made some horrible blogs in the past. But knowing you Hana, you would probably go and look at my horrible blogs. http://ymsmika.blogspot.com/
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Mika, can you please help me do some things at home and stuff? It would be great if you did! oh and, you got me right, I will snoop around... :3
ReplyDeleteWell done Hana. You are very good effort in your writing. Keep up the great work.
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Nishka make sure you add a greeting, something thoughtful and something helpful.
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Ki-ora Hana,
ReplyDeletei love the story that you made with your friends there you are good at making you and your friends.
love takira.
Wow what an amazing first post Hana. Very well thought out and with zero spelling mistakes. Good work.
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