Hi there! I have been working on my Who I am slide! I have been working hard on this so I hope you like it!
Tuesday 19 February 2019
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Hi Hana! It's me Mia. I love your slide, and the flowers worked out really well. I am so happy that I am not only the one that wants to be a musician. I really like the outline's and the color choices you have used, you seem to have a lot of nature and fun in your slides, it really brings out you! Something that you could do is that you add a ending slide to it, that way it does seem like it's the end of the slide. Did you make this on Canva?
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your amazing posts!
Mia
its really cute and i love the desine hope you replie to my comment
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ReplyDeleteHey Hana, its me Parwin!
ReplyDeleteI love your post because the background is vibrant and the flowers and everything really stands out which makes it look cool! We have a lot of things in common like how you like art, same with me and your favourite movie is Aqua Man! Best movie ever, that's my favourite as well! We both have the same name meanings because my name means a flower and the brightest star in persian and farsi! I really loved your post because everything was bold and stood out and every slide was super colourful and pretty! Plus, I am on your slide as well as your friends! Overall, I can only describe your post in one word, okay maybe more than one...
SUPER DUPER AMAZINGLY AWESOME! Did you make the flowers and photos where you put things about yourself or are they images that you put into your slide?
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Hana. It's Mikael I like you'r layout of you who am I thing. The only thing it that some of the slides are a bit hard to read so next time I think you should make them a bit bigger but apart from that I think that it is really good. And how is Artheres pas, me and my family go past it on the way to totaranui and it looks really nice.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the slide were you had all of the cute, cuddly and soft cats. Olivia loves the one with the ears folded. I like your facts, my favorite one was the one were you said your nickname was worm, that's cool! Next time, you could add more detail with the words. How did you get this done in time?
-Amelia
Hi Hana,
ReplyDeleteYour blog is great as always 😊. I also like the background you picked to, very creative. This reminds me of the time when I made an animation about me. It was time consuming but fun to make.
The 7the slide does have a mistake in it. Instead of saying "my future career is a musician" it would make more sense if you say, "I want my future career to be a musician". Also, in the 9th slide, it says "My favorite music is Geronimo" when Geronimo is a song. I'm looking forward to your next post. Bye!
By Mika ._____<_____.